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Donít Judge meÖ

Donít judge me by looks, neither by my race.
Donít complain about my worries, nor because my taste.
Donít hate me for my religion, for it is what I believe.
Donít sit here and back talk the world, for it will not relieve.
Donít despise me for my interests, or for my complex maze.
Donít dislike my sexuality, for I was born this way.
Donít hate me for my hair, all colors bleed the same.
Donít forget Iím standing here, yet I do have a name.
Donít judge me by my voice, we all donít sound alike.
Donít yell into the crowd, and laugh at whatís not right.
Donít complain about my emotions, for what I cannot control.
Donít sit here still wondering, what next is there to be told?
Donít despise me for my fortunes, or what I cherish most.
Donít judge me by my home to stay, on or off the coast.
Please tell me you can hear thisÖ Tell me you know now.
That you shall never judge someone, for what you cant allow.
We all are different, and have our own tastes.
We canít all share the same, but within others hasteís-
Who knows what can happenÖ even a day from today.
So please, do not judge meÖ for what you cannot say.
I know I often say this; itís nagging in my mind.
Itís sad and true but can be helped form all of human kind.
Itís something we all can prevent, and open though our eyes.
We all should learn, from this place, and stop to improvise.
For if thereís no tomorrow, and somehow we all die.
Then think about the guilt you feelÖ and all the shredded lies.
Just a simple, 10 min poem i made up just to show the world, that you shouldnt judge someone for what you can't see. My Dad thought it was pretty good, so i decided to post it. Its kinda sad, but true. One of my best friends, was like this. He was always picked on, for his sexuality. I felt so bad for him. In a way, i dedicate this to him for standing strong for what he believed in. ^__^ To my good friend Mark.
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brOKen-Mayhem17 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Impressive!! Very well written ;)
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88SRENAISSANCE88 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Professional General Artist
Very nice...i like how you ended it.
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Tylon Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Professional Artist
Thank you very much! :)
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Shelomtzion Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
awesome :))
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noobyzgir350 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2012  Student General Artist
this describes me
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arnhival Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
really nice!! I really like it!
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Tylon Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2010  Professional Artist
Thanks so much!
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arnhival Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
can i share this to my friends?i mean your poem?
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Tylon Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2010  Professional Artist
Sure, go ahead! :) Just link back. credit so they know where/ incase they want to share as well :)
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arnhival Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
ok..^_^ thanks...
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animelover4eva77 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
<3 thank u some much I just hope some day everyone will be able to read this <3 thx again. ^^
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:icontylon:
Tylon Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010  Professional Artist
Awww...

:)

It is an older work of mine, but so true in the world...
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animelover4eva77 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
^^ Yes but it is new to me ^^ I love it...And yes you are so right.
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arnhival Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
gosh i really like it!!!
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NinjaPenguin007 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009
Amazing poem! Unfortunatly, there are people out there who continue to judge others. But hey, we're human and humans tend to do those things ^^. Love the poem! Definetly faving this!
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PinkBlackLotus Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
this is really great! haha (told you ill pc you back :P )
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firesme Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Student General Artist
i really like this poem - content and style.
but if i were you id leave out the part from 'We all are different, and have our own tastes.' to 'We all should learn, from this place, and stop to improvise.' --- dunno, i think its becoming a little too much, it makes the rest a little less worth - dyou understand what i mean?
what do you think?
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2009  Professional Artist
Ah... this poem is revised heavily (Its submitted in a book... this is the older one) so a lot of the lines were altered and switched around.

and Thank you! :)
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Crusnik-O2 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great poem, it describes it in a very interesting way that catches the readers attention. I agree with you though, this world would be alot better of if people just learned not to judge others. We may all be different from one another, but we all still deserve to be treated with respect and love. Not hatred and jelousy.

That one line, "we all bleed the same" I find very true. It doesnt matter what color your skin is, the inside is still the same. The blood is still Red when it comes out. And still blue while its inside you.

Overall. This is an amazing piece of work you have here. You are very talented. :+fav: This deserves a Fav, but also so much more.

And there is one thing we can do to help the world with this problem. We can teach our friends, children, and loved ones not to judge. And show them how much it hurts others. and hopefully, they will see the truth. ^^
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009  Professional Artist
Thank you!

I'm glad you like it!

^^

It makes me feel so good when people read and enjoy my writings... :)
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Crusnik-O2 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Your very welcome :D ^^

:) :giggle:
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jhomz Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2008
this is me. everyone judges me, and all i can do is ignore. in my mind, i wanna see them in the school gate and stab a knife on their heads and cut of their throat and tongues..! :rage:

nice poem though! D
thanks!
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memphis05 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for writing this poem. It describes all of our troubles.
The thing I hate the most is when I talk, and no one listens.
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Tylon Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2008  Professional Artist
Ah thank you!

I tried to outline all the problems, and come to one, final conclusion! ^^
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memphis05 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
^^
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apple845 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
i love the whole phrase....it was inspired me for sure..
it's true, we can't judge people without knowing their true self.

you played with the great words and you made it sound so brilliant...
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Naterix Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008
That pretty much applies to my daily life. I always get picked on because they say I'm a girl, I am, but the boys and SOME of the girls in my school spread rumors about me, tease me, make me look bad, BECAUSE they don't even know me. I'm thankful that I have at least ONE friend I can count on to help me. Can I feature this in my journal?
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2008  Professional Artist
Awww gosh I am so sorry hun... :(

Sure, feel free if you like to feature...
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Rancid-Pen Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2008
ubber kudos.
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writtenbyadaughter Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2008   Writer
Awesome! What more to say? :)
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psychoshinigami Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008
if only everyone saw through your eyes...
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imagineKID Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2008
That is a great poem, I love it!
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KairasCreations Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2008  Student Digital Artist
i love the poem
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JamesGoldsworthy Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2008
very nice i like it alot
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alyssinelysium Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008  Student Digital Artist
call me a tree hugger but i tottaly had an image of people across the world suddenly holding hands. Can i use this as an example?
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2008  Professional Artist
lol sure! :)

thankies
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IJustWannaBeMe Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2007
Do you know how amazing that is? It desribes everyone in the world all blended into one perfect poem. I love it...the flow is very nice as well. The concept. *dies* Genius, you put it together in a beautiful format.

Excellent work! :D
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Tylon Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2007  Professional Artist
Thank you oh so very much! <33333333

Glad you like it!
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IJustWannaBeMe Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2007
You're very welcome! My pleasure. :D
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Jonique Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool poem! Dont judge me!!! =D
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2007  Professional Artist
Thankies!
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FoxFeatherJazz Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2005
This is a very intelligently written poem. I can see inside you through your words. I have a friend who gets torn apart because of his sexuality. I may forward this link to him. You are one of the lucky few that think on your own and need no one else's influence to decide your own worth. Congratulations! :clap:
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Lojanic Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2005
It's a very strong poem, I like it but it also makes me sad for some reason...
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2005  Professional Artist
Aw thank you! ^__^ yes, i thought it to was kinda sad.... :cry:
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kuponut2004 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A very inspirational poem! :claps: Sadly, it is difficult to erase prejudice and discrimination in human nature, if not impossible. I wish it were easy though... 'Coz it's just really sad if people kept on discriminating each other. I mean, overall, we're pretty much the same. We're all human.
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Lilychibi Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005
Nice work! Way better poem then I could write o.o This is deserving of a :+fav:! ^^
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005  Professional Artist
Awww thank you! ^__^ I have been practicing poetry!
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Inverted-Shadow Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005
:happycry: :clap: :+fav:
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Tylon Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005  Professional Artist
Awww thank you! So sweet of you! :heart: ^^
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Inverted-Shadow Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2005
your welcome :aww:
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